Tuesday, 12 November 2013

'Mise-en-Scene' Film Review


1 comment:

  1. Hi Ruby!
    You have made some interesting observations here - a suggestion for another time; you have discussed the difference in the use of colour between the nuns and the native culture, and backed it up with a useful quote, but you then jump on to talking about the use of miniatures, before switching back to the colour theme again. It would have flowed better if the last paragraph had followed on from the quote, as a means of unpicking it.
    Also, I would have shifted figure 2 up a bit so it is sitting by the text that is actually describing the height of the bell tower...

    Don't forget to italicise your quotes, and to put the date of publication in the bibliography too, after the author's name.

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