Made me chuckle with the sound effects Ruby XDOne extra note, i'd recommend having Pharell's Happy song on and fade when it says 20 mins later. Then have another track, perhaps another track he did. This one? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQnyZAWtQNE&noredirect=1Plus the odds of her walking into the hairdressers with the music just starting is slim so cut a few seconds in :) Hope this helps
Oh right okay, thanks for the idea Rhys :). I'll make final tweaks tomorrow once everything else is done lol.