Tuesday, 25 March 2014

'Fantastic Voyage' Film Review



1 comment:

  1. Hi Ruby!

    Don't forget to always put ALL your film names in italics - you have a whole chunk of them up there needing it :) You should also put the dates by the other film names too, so 'Superman Returns' (2006), for example. (I can't do italics on the comments, but you get the picture!)

    Your writing is definitely sounding less 'chatty' than it was, but still try and avoid using words like 'guy', which take away from the academic tone that you want to try and get now.

    You say that the flashbacks are based on 'Kevin Spacey’s crimpled character' ...is 'crimpled' a real word? :)

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